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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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A smartphone is a source of refreshment for
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 day using mobile
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 and what can be the negative and positive aspects of using
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 and foremost,
children
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phones
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 for hours to get entertainment. They play different video
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 of playing physical
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. To illustrate, if
children
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 spend their
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 playing video
games
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 on mobile
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, it will give them more pleasure without any effort, while physical
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 are more efforts demanding.
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, youngsters love to watch different videos and movies on mobile
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, playing
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 and watching movies is the biggest reason for
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 using mobile
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,
children
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 are nowadays smarter because they know how to use technology.
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 helps them in their studies.
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, if a student is good at using mobile
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, he/she will
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 be good at studies.
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, using a lot of mobile
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 will adversely affect the health of
children
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. To illustrate, if a child spends his whole day using a mobile phone, it will badly affect his/her eyesight and
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 his/her mind. In short, spending more
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 on
smartphones
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 will make
children
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 smarter but it will
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 affect their health. To conclude, in
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 essay I discussed that
children
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 use
smartphones
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 for playing video
games
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 and watching movies and argue that the addiction to
smartphones
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 will make
children
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 smarter while will
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 affect their health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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