Questions: In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagee?

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Nowadays,it is illegal to do advertisements for

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in several nations.I agree with the view because it is detrimental to the inhabitant's well-being and leads to deviant behaviour.The essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance

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with,the primary cause why currently

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is illegal to market in the press is because it is harmful to human health.A lot of youngsters now drink

alcohol

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which is causing them a lot of diseases .

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, in ,Ghana most youth are suffering from Hypertension and Diabetes Mellitus because of the consumption of hard beverages.

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,they tend to consume it because it's being endorsed by their favourite celebrities.Adoro drinks are very popular and consumed by a lot of people because of an advert made by Shatta Wale,a Ghanaian musician.

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, the government has barred the marketing of it so that the

citizen

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will be healthier.

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,another reason for forbidding the marketing of hard liquors is it leads to social vices.The majority of individuals commit offences

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as stealing ,killing and raping when they take in

alcohol

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,someone was stabbed at the

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by someone who consumed

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. In order to prevent these social vices ,the government has placed a ban on advertisements regarding hard liquors.

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companies will not get a profit, citizens will be healthy. In conclusion,the essay argued that the promotion of liquors should be barred from the media.The reasons I opine with banning

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

259 words

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