You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I
had
organized an all-day meeting for my company in your hotel Unnecessary verb
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last
week, and I am writing this
letter to share the feedback of my colleagues for Correct your spelling
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First
of all, everyone liked the conference room, it was very spacious and the chairs were quite comfortable. Moreover
, the staff was very helpful in fulfilling even the ad-hoc demands. As it was a business meeting, our time was valued very highly and we were served everything on time.
However
, most of the people had complaints about food
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the food
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, there were a variety of cuisines served but
none of it felt fresh to them. The Remove the conjunction
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breads
had gone hard and seemed like they were prepared long before Change the wording
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being
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served. A few of the diners were not happy as there was no salad provided.
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Except
the Add the preposition
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food
, we liked everything about your hotel, so I would like to suggest you to
please keep a check on Remove the particle
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freshness
of the Correct article usage
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and it will also
be great to see more salad options. As we always give the estimated number of participants for our meetings, you could make the necessary arrangements in advance to make sure that everything is served hot and fresh.
I hope that you would consider my suggestion and the next
time we will be able to enjoy food
as much as we enjoyed the other facilities.
Yours sincerely,
Dhruva AhujaCorrect article usage
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