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Some people say that governments should pay for the public health care and education, while others say that it is people’s own responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, medical care and education
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 been emphasized by
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 public, with conflicting views on who are
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 for these areas. There are some
people
 who think that
governments
 should cover the costs, while other opponents claim that individuals pay for themselves.
Administration
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 should deal with
this
 problem. The basic reason
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 in that it is an advisable way to develop all-round
people
 in the physic and intelligent when
governments
 invest some
money
 on them.
Therefore
, these
people
 gather and tackle the social development problems to ensure
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sustainable development. Except that, everyone can get an equal chance to access
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medical care and education.
For example
,
people
 who live in
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impoverished family can go to
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college and acquire
the
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 diploma in order to get
an
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 stable job in the future, which can remain
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stability. But
this
 does not automatically mean that
governments
 should pay all the
money
. After all, countries’ economy is limited not endless. If they pay all the
money
, it
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 the budget in countries and damage
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the development in other areas. In
this
 case, as well as individuals don’t put
ourselves
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 aside and should play a part of
role
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 in
this
 issue. The main reason is we gain the directed benefit, so it is rational for us to pay some
money
. In conclusion, every part
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the
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society, no matter the
governments
 or individuals, should cooperate and coordinate together to build a more prosperous world.
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