Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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humans have been interesting

arts

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for

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years. At

first

, when humans had been living in caves, the

arts

were

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way

for

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connection

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with

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other. In fact, they were likely to know anything about

arts

but they

have

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created the wonderful work of

arts

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.

Otherwise

, they had never been looking for fame even

they

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just

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had a social action.

For instance

, having painted a cow on the wall of

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, they would particularly teach their children how they would know that.

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, the

arts

are nowadays the

way

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people show their feeling and thought. Remarkably,

such

as

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, Artists will be explaining their beliefs for the future with their accomplishments and talents.

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,

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art would be

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valuable heritage and without

it

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we would never have found how

ancestors

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have been living.

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, a film or

a

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writing even a painting might help us how their creators think.

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, in some

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the social information is given by artists’ accomplishments. In conclusion, it seems spending money

for

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the

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artwork

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art work

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not only would help the governments and societies to develop but

also

help the future to recognize how they think.

Thus

, spending money on the

arts

would be fruitful for all people. So, consuming budget for it cause expand knowledge of folk and it will inversely help the society to identify themselves by the art.

However

, it is not the only

way

to realize

this

but it is one of the best

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