Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Jasmeen , I
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you and your family are all well . I cannot go with you to see a movie but
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friend he going with you . He is
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pretty person. Begin
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am
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going with my family
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outside . We are
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beach . Now
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is very sunny and one more
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my
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little
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birthday
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this
day so we are
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. One of my best
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jass he going with you my friend . He is
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happy person all time he standing with me
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think so you
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know
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my birthday party you and jass
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there . He is very nice Best regards
Arwinder
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Singh
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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