Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that the
teacher
plays a significant role in the
life
of every
student
for ages. Some people think that because of a good
teacher
students
get success in their
education
, while some people think that educational success depends on
student
attitude. I agree with the statement that educational success depends on a good
teacher
and I think
this
way for two reasons, which I will discuss in
this
essay.
Firstly
,
to begin
with, the
students
, I feel that, nowadays
students
are surrounded by
lot
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of extra activities, which
keeps
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them busy,
such
as playing video games, games on smartphones, use of social sites for chatting with friends, movies, amusement parks and many more. If there is no guidance in their
life
,
students
easily get distracted and use their precious time more in these activities rather than in studies. Here, a good professor can guide their
students
, to focus more on their studies and can motivate them to become diligent
for
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their
education
and utilise their time in a pragmatic way.
Subsequently
, a good educator can easily grab the
student
's problem and aid in solving the issue. My own personal experience is a compelling example of
this
. When I was in
my
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high school, I was not good
in
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at
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math subjects and I
also
don't like to study math.
As a result
, I used to get passing marks
in
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my monthly class test. My educator recognizes the issue and
let
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me know that because of my poor understanding of the subject, I am doing below average in it.
Therefore
, she give me daily practice tests to learn the concept in a better way and
also
helped me to clear my basics in the subject. Just after a month, I get a distinction on my math test. In conclusion, I believe that a good
teacher
can make a strong base of
student
life
, both in
education
and
as a result
in career,
hence
aiding
students
to be more successful in
education
and in every aspect of
life
.
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