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The Government should allocate more funding to teaching science than to other subjects so that the country can develop. Do you agree or disagree?

#government #science #subjects #country
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In today's world, an increasing number of people think that a large proportion of government funds should be invested in teaching
science
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-related, to achieve what is termed economic
development
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. In my opinion,
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science
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 plays a large role, other
subjects
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 hold their merits and
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, deserve equal government investment and funding. On the one hand, public funding in
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 education
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 is important in driving the
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 of a country in many areas,
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 as technology and medicine.
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, developed countries
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 as Japan have emphasised the
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 education of their citizens.
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 strong focus has led to scientific research achievement, knowledge fosters innovation, and increases productivity, which directly contributes to nations' economic
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.
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, investment in teaching
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 is an indispensable part of a country's economic progress.
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,
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 does not mean that only
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subjects
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 are important. Other
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 like art, literature, and history play a vital part in the
development
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 of nations.
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, those who do not have a knack for calculating or using formulas in
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subjects
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, still have their own strength in
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 related to social
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. These
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 make people aware of their history and culture. They are
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 a factor in the
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 of long experienced historical countries so that these countries become the most popular tourist destinations. After that, no nation can progress only on the wing of
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. In conclusion,
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science
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subjects
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 have an impact on the
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 and progress of one's nation, I totally agree government should balance in investing both
science
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 and other
subjects
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.
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