In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes, what are the causes? How should these young criminals to be punished?

Despite the fact that social advances have brought about many benefits to people’s daily lives, the rate of crime has not efficiently been curbed

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but rather been aggravated.

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analyze all the possible causes of the problem and

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come up with several feasible solutions that could be adopted in order to avoid the aggravation of the situation. The main causes that may lead to

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problem can be listed as follows. The

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cause of

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increasing number of juvenile delinquency might be the

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wrong values of

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generation. Compared with the past, the gap between the rich and the poor has

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widened to a big difference. According to

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phenomenon, more inequities will

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, youngsters who are immature, are partial to

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a crime to fight injustice.

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is the inevitable result of social development.

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of companionship of

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culprit for the growing number of juvenile delinquency. It is very common that in some rural regions of China, due to lack

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opportunities,

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under-developed

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rural region and migrate to big cities for the purpose of finding

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excellent job,

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their children alone or living with the elderly.

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, children who lack

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parenting and companionship of

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will be easier to go astray and

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why nowadays teenagers are committing more crimes. Several methods can be adopted in order to solve the aggravating problem.

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of all, for the light circumstances, there is no doubt that their

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the penalty so as to warn children

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crimes.

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, under any circumstances, criminals should

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juvenile offenders between sixteen and eighteen years old and had

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someone, would go to the correctional institution. In conclusion,

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and the public should pay more attention to

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children’s mental health, and in order to avoid the growth of

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delinquency rate, paying

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and going to

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institution

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for offenders are the three solutions that I came up with.