Some people consider that the education which is come from school is more important than learning in the family. Other people think the opposite way. Discuss both sides and give examples.
Some
people
think that the education
which comes from schooling is more important than the education
which comes from family. Both of them have negative and positive sides and these will be discussed below.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that every individual start learning in their families. The first
word that comes from a person’s mouth can countable as a first
step which is taken into educational life
. Some parameters are essential to build
an educational Change the verb form
building
life
such
as communication with others and gaining a moral outlook. Those components can be provided only by parents. Throughout, people
learn how to talk and behave to other people
in the core family. Then
, the communication web starts to grow with extended family
Change the noun form
families
such
as uncles and cousins. However
, the origin that is
taken from family is not enough all by itself.
On the other hand
, the
Correct article usage
apply
education
which is come from schooling is the way to build a career. Even though a person has conscious of moral or excellent communication skills, it might not enough to be successful in his/her life
. For instance
, a student who wants to become an engineer should reach some knowledge about some topics such
as math thus
this
person can reach her/his goal. The educational
Correct article usage
Educational
life
is crucial to have
a bright future.
Wrong verb form
having
As
Change preposition
In
a
conclusion, it is obvious that Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
education
takes origin from schooling or family and both components are crucial and essential. People
start to learn in their families. However
, there would be no meaning if people
won’t continue to improve themself with the
schooling.Change the word
their
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