Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as, Sahara desert or the Antarcatic What are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

There are different kinds of tourists which are ready to discover new thing if we
tak
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talk
about
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desert it is the full of sand nothing there
people
came there to check that survival ratio and it is pretty difficult to found water there so they keep their
botles
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bottles
with them
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is the world largest sand so
people
always wondering to visit
such
places bechari it is cheap and affordable mostly
people
use camel to visit
such
places there are different types of insects which worth is kore
then
million dollars if they catch
such
tupe
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type
of insects so they can be
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if we look at the disadvantage
then
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is very difficult place only crazy
people
survive there there are no water nothing to eat only camel milk and insects
people
eat there the temperature of
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is quite high
then
other deserts if unlucky a person sleep possible a bird bite him or snake bite him there are huge amount of scorpions in
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which have high level of
poision
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poison
in there body if they bite human so he died just in five minutes
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