In most elementary and high schools in Asia, students are required to wear uniforms. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing school uniforms?

Nowadays, Many people argue that
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uniforms are required
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school
in Asia. While there are some advantages to
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phenomenon. I am of the opinion that the drawback will likely be more significant. On the one hand, the option to wear the uniform can exert many positive effects.
Firstly
, We save money
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buying clothes
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the uniform's price is suitable. Their family
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need to buy more for children.
Secondly
, They are similar students in the
school
with the same clothes.
This
is mainly due to rich and poor people will not separate in
school
.
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, People wear the
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of
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school
. They always remember
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outside knows about that.
On the other hand
,
this
practice can highlight a number of valid concerns. The
first
drawback relates to
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free fashion style.
This
is because there are many style fashions which students like. The
second
one is that the uniform is uncomfortable.
For instance
, there are some typical sizes of uniforms. If you are too fat or thin, you will order a special one for yourself. It takes a long time,
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It can not be fitted perfectly to your body. In conclusion,
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there are many advantages to wearing uniforms. I believe the benefits that result from
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trend are of more vital significance. It is recommended that we improve
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and suitable clothes for each person.
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