In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, people believe that learning taken from foreign countries can help them to achieve well-paid

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where there is unemployment due to excessive population or lack of sufficiency of businesses

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, where there is unemployment due to excessive population or lack of sufficiency of businesses,

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can generate enough jobs, unemployment due to excessive population or lack of sufficiency of businesses can generate enough careers prefer to

study

out of their domestic land.

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regions like India where there is no shortage of talent, most of the students from some states are moving outside on

study

visas and are able to achieve the work they were looking into.

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, learnings which are obtained from globally and highly recognised institutes like Harward or Oxford university give an edge over other candidates who achieve the same qualification from the domestic institutes.

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some believe its the best option to travel abroad for studies and for achieving good jobs.

On the other hand

, with the perspective that

study

is similar whether achieved through global or domestic institutes, some enrolled themselves locally and achieve their learning. They work hard and achieve higher schooling, took a job and by doing hard work achieve new heights In conclusion, due to the higher unemployment rate sometimes its difficult to achieve the desired job with good pay. So, in order to achieve one should look for

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better opportunities abroad and have their

study

there.