Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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it is argued that spoken
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written
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. In my opinion, as much as written
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can be useful, I think spoken
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has lots of advantages that
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it more powerful. The most important thing in
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is minimizing conflicts and misunderstandings. The advantage of communicating through speaking is that the tone and intensity of one’s voice
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information about the way they want to express
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. They can even manage the speed at which they want to talk and stop to
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if necessary.
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way they can make everything crystal clear. In some
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the body language and facial expressions during spoken
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would
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help the audience to understand better.
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can even help people get to know each other and maybe find out about one’s personality too. In the case of writing though, it’s much harder to do these things.
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, speaking gives people the chance to be more interactive in
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means that one can observe the responses and make decisions about how to continue the conversation. They can correct
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and explain more if need be.
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in written
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it takes more time to understand and act on potential mistakes or ambiguities. I would
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like to mention that monotony may cause written
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to become boring but since spoken
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is interactive, it can be appealing. To conclude, while both two ways are important and have their own advantages, I believe that spoken
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is more powerful than written
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in many aspects.
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