You have seen and advertisement for a couple, who lives in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. In your letter Explain why you think you would be suitable for this job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reason for wanting the job

Dear Mr Robert, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in teaching a language to your child. My name is Arsalan Farooq and
last
month I saw the advert related to teaching your kid my national language, French, for the whole
year
.
However
, I would be interested in it and would love to perform
this
job because of a couple of reasons.
Firstly
, I live near to your residence, so it would be feasible for me to get there and manage a schedule of classes conveniently.
Moreover
, I am a French teacher by profession and I have been teaching it for 10
years
.
Therefore
, I have a vast experience in it and know how to make your child speak it in one
year
.
Besides
my core field, I can perform nursing services as well. Since you both are working people and it would surely be easier for you to look after your kid for the whole day when you will be out of the home. I have already done
this
work when I was in the
third
year
of my university. I did it for two
years
for a well know centre and
also
received the award of the best Care Taker. It is requested you hire me as I will have to apply for a new job
next
year
and for
this
, I need 12
years
of experience.
Although
,
this
is going to be 11
years
by the end of
this
month. But if I manage to get
this
opportunity I would be able to achieve 12
years
in
this
field by the
next
year
and would be eligible for the new vacancy. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq
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