Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people argue that countries and the public should preserve the nearly

extincted

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extinct

animals

, while opponents consider social problems related to

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mankind are more significant. From my perspective, I believe that the protection of some animal species and solving social problems are equally important. On one hand, it is

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crucial

critical

cruical

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crucial

to protect

animals

which are essential to our

eco-system

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.

For example

, some species are irreplaceable in the food chains. If they were extinct, it would cause

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in the natural system and might be detrimental to the survival of human beings.

Furthermore

, some

animals

have

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cultural

cultral

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cultural

values and serve as national identity. Pandas are

extincting

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extinct

animals

and are symbols of Chinese culture,

therefore

, local government fund in

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and set up national parks for pandas.

On the other hand

, there are

also

various social issues like education, health

care

and poverty, which requires national funding and support.

For instance

, children from economically backward areas might have no access to schooling and have to become underaged workers to support their families. The government should increase educational investments and make sure every child can receive compulsory education.

Moreover

, many people cannot afford medical

care

and they have to give up treatment or choose to take less effective but cheaper medicines. Both central and local governments should subsidise the needy on health

care

and none should refuse treatments because of economic reasons. In conclusion, the government and individuals should take the responsibility to protect

extincting

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extinction

extinct

animals

which are important to

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society.

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Similarily

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, other social issues including education and health

care

should be tackled

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as well.