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The use of corporal punishment (physical hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The use of physical punishments like canning and flogging in institutions is declining .
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,a section of society
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 that it should be used to discipline
students
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.I totally agree with
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 view because it will deter pupils from disobeying
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 and regulations.The essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance
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 examples in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with,the most compelling reason for agreeing to
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 view is because it serves as a deterrent.The student when punished by canning after not obeying the
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.
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 will deter them from performing
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 acts again.
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,it will prevent others from breaking the
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 and regulations of the school.
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,Mensa came to the institute late and was punished by his tutor.,
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 ever since all the
students
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 come to the institute on time.
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, leads to abiding by the principles of the institution.
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,another reason for concording with
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 view is because it will help them in life.If
students
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 are punished to conform to the principle of an institution.When they grow up and start work they will abide by the
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of their work because it will be part of them from their childhood.
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,Issaka obeys
rules
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 because he learned that from his school days.
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 ,it helps pupils to learn time management because they need to get to school on time or else they will be punished. In conclusion,the essay argued that physical hitting of
students
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 should be used to improve youngster behaviour.Abiding by the
rules
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 and helping them in their career are the two main reasons I concord with
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 opinion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • short-term compliance
  • long-term behavioral improvements
  • emotional damage
  • positive reinforcement
  • restorative justice
  • negative consequences
  • children's rights
  • psychological impacts
  • contemporary educational philosophies
  • non-violent disciplinary methods
  • safer and more positive school environment
  • engage better
  • outdated viewpoint
  • holistic development
  • well-being of students
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