Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extend d you agree or disagree?
There is some argument that it is more beneficial for children to read tales or
novels
than to watch TV
or play computer games
. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this
idea because reading stories has more remarkable merits for boys and girls than watching TV
or playing electronic games
.
First
of all, reading tales will improve youngster's
communication skills in a more significant way. Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters'
This
means that young people would be able not only to expand their ranges
of vocabulary but Fix the agreement mistake
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also
to realize other persons' emotions and feelings easier by reading novels
and else. For example
, it is said that a student who is a bookworm of novels
are
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situations
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is because a person who have
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novels
can understand the mechanism of human's
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However
, although
there has been a lot of interactive TV
programs or computer games
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communication
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, you can expand your knowledge deeper Correct your spelling
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a variety of topics. Change preposition
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, it is possible to grasp the details of particular
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For instance
, if you read a historical novel which is focused on someone who lived in the US in the 20th you would be able to understand the reality of discrimination of
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TV
programs or playing historical games
will make the youth to
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information is Correct article usage
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fewer
than reading tales and historical Correct quantifier usage
less
novels
.
In conclusion, I am convinced of the opinion that reading stories from a book is more influential to young people than watching TV
or playing computer games
from the perspective of the improvement of communication skills and knowledge.Submitted by akio24jeff54 on
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