Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extend d you agree or disagree?

There is some argument that it is more beneficial for children to read tales or

novels

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than to watch

TV

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or play computer

games

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. In my opinion, I strongly agree with

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idea because reading stories has more remarkable merits for boys and girls than watching

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or playing electronic

games

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.

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of all, reading tales will improve

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communication skills in a more significant way.

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means that young people would be able not only to expand their

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of vocabulary but

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to realize other persons' emotions and feelings easier by reading

novels

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and else.

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, it is said that a student who is a bookworm of

novels

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are

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more sensible than an ordinary student to infer what the member of his/her family feels when confronted with some particular

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.

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is because a person who

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read plenty of

novels

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can understand the mechanism of

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emotional movement

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books.

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,

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there has been a lot of interactive

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programs or computer

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,

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of things slightly nourish what others think or react

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various conditions since the contents of

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are superficial and limited. In

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addition

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, you can expand your knowledge deeper

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a variety of topics.

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, it is possible to grasp the details of

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society or workplace in accordance with what kind of occupation

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the main character has and where and when he/she lives.

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, if you read a historical novel which is focused on someone who lived in the US in the 20th you would be able to understand the reality of discrimination

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the movement of cultivation in the

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US at

that time. Though watching

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categories of documentary

TV

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programs or playing historical

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will make the youth

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understand the history in a certain situation, the amount of

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information is

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than reading tales and historical

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. In conclusion, I am convinced of the opinion that reading stories from a book is more influential to young people than watching

TV

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or playing computer

games

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from the perspective of the improvement of communication skills and knowledge.