You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend: * What the gadget is * What you think about it * Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy
Dear Preeti,
I'm fine here and I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm glad to know that you want to purchase the same refrigerator which I purchased and need my advice for that.
Recently, I bought a fridge from a nearby store. It was of the brand Samsung and black in colour. Moreover
, It has all the advanced features and is rated 4-star. Furthermore
, I get an additional discount because I paid the whole amount by credit card.
After using the equipment, my mother is really joyful as it is far better than her expectations. Also
, It consumed less power and electricity than my previous gadget. Apart from it, it has a large storage area, hence
, I feel that it was a good decision to buy it.
Thus
, I recommend you get this
article at such
a reasonable price. However
, you can also
look at other alternatives like Sony and LG in order to purchase a refrigerator. I hope my advice will surely help you with your decision.
Pay regards to your family from my side.
Best Regards,
Kuljeet.Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite