Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel but other people that it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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experiment has been a topic of debate for the past decades. Some scientists consider that it is beneficial to use
animals
for testing.
On the contrary
, others reckon that these
experiments
are brutal and unreasonable to innocent
animals
. In
this
essay, I am going to elaborate on the discussion of
this
issue.
First
and foremost, one of the main merits of undergoing animal
experiments
is that people can benefit from the results of these investigations.
For example
, due to
the
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COVID-19, the demand for
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increased dramatically.
Therefore
, lots of pharmaceutical companies devoted themselves to the investigation of
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and
also
carried out numerous animal
experiments
.
As a result
,
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human
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can get a safe
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vaccine
without
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effects.
Although
animal testing brings a lot of positive sides
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science
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field, some oppose it. They believe humans have no moral right to conduct
experiments
on
animals
.
In addition
, most of the
animals
died in these researches eventually.
For instance
, I saw
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research
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depression
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the magazine
few
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days ago, that scientists inject new medicines into healthy mice and observe the changes
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their
behavior
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.
However
, it shows that some rats become irritable and demented. In conclusion,
although
animals
are not human, they should
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equally. But the contributions they make are
irreplacable
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irreplaceable
and have a significant meaning to
humans
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life. In my
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opinion
opion
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opinion
, I reckon that
animals
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tests are
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necessary
necessrary
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necessary
due to the scientific knowledge they gave us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Animal experimentation
  • Cruelty
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Medical breakthroughs
  • In vivo testing
  • In vitro testing
  • Bioethics
  • Alternative methods
  • Regulatory oversight
  • Vivisection
  • Animal welfare
  • Pharmacological research
  • Toxicology
  • Clinical trials
  • Moral imperatives
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