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Millions of people every year move to english speaking countries in order to get better education.should they learn in their own country & migrate or should they go there or learn?

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The importance of communication which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject
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 potential impact in recent years.In my opinion,learning English from
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benefit
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 regard is that a student is able to study & work side by side.Categorically discussing,it can not be ignored that the main reason behind
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that English is becoming a popular language. Moving
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why many are in
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 of
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the conclusion that the
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