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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while your are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this fiend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear John, I hope you are pink in your health. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I get admission to ABC University in Toronto. As you know that mere I have completed my graduation in Civil Engineering from Delhi University.
Hence
, recently I made a plan to continue my study
thus
, I had apply for postgraduation in the same stream
consequently
,
last
 Friday, I got the confirmation letter from the University. I would like to tell you that my family's financial condition is not well due to the corona pandemic
therefore
, to survive in ,Canada I ought to do any part-time work so that, I can collect my
next
 year's fee as well as to full fill my basic requirements there. You have been living here for the
last
 5 years, I hope it will be straightforward for you to help me to find a relevant job related to my previous study. I have attached my updated resume with
this
 letter as together as sent on your email id. I am looking forward to your positive response You are lovingly Gurmit Singh
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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