Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small number of people*. *Some say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that it would be a waste of money*. *Discuss both these views and give your opinion.*

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there are more than 6,000
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;
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, a grand amount of
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are disappearing because they are spoken by fewer
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. Many
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opine that the government should invest public
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in order to save these
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, while others claim that it is a waste of
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I will take a look at both sides of the argument.
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of all, many
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believe in order to preserve a
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the government should spend a bunch of
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.
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amount of
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could help in hiring more interpreters or even more teachers, so they can teach domestic students and international students.
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, in my country, Bolivia, schools are obligated to teach a native
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like Aymara or Quechua, so the students can easily interact with native speakers of that kind. To sum up, for these
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investing in
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is an excellent way to save those
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.
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, many individuals think that spending public capital so a
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can still existing, it is a waste of
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.
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, they think that it is better to invest that
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in hospitals, schools, or even food.
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, we are using
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money
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on useful resources that can benefit the population. They really do not care if a
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became extinct.
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argument sounds reasonable, in my opinion preserving a
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is a beautiful way of bringing tourists to the country.
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, a
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for many
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is very important in their environment and history, especially the elderly
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, because they want other' generations can be able to speak it.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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