In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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are fetching immense popularity. There are many reasons that people are well liking it. Before giving my opinion I would like to talk

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period individuals are much more interested in watching non-fiction movies or reading something full of suspense or actual

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stories. So, these days

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there is nothing much more glamorous about one side of the world. And that we definitely relate to! Apart from that, Even I myself

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crime stories. I am very much fond of watching non-fiction dramas. Recently I have been watching "DELHI CRIME" it has two seasons one is based on the real incident of 2012 Delhi rap case and it is breathtaking.

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is a fiction story

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very interesting to watch as it makes us face the reality and

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the incidents that might could happen to us.

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more often. To conclude, as it is full of suspense and thriller people are more likely to watch TV crime dramas.

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their interest level. I

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is do common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both views.

In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In a public-funded health care system people who are willing to pay for the best and fastest treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people hesitate between getting a job and starting their own business. While the idea of not having a boss and working on one's own schedule may sound tempting, financial risks and stress sometimes outweigh these advantages. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of working in a company?

Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.