In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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are fetching immense popularity. There are many reasons that people are well liking it. Before giving my opinion I would like to talk

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period individuals are much more interested in watching non-fiction movies or reading something full of suspense or actual

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stories. So, these days

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there is nothing much more glamorous about one side of the world. And that we definitely relate to! Apart from that, Even I myself

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crime stories. I am very much fond of watching non-fiction dramas. Recently I have been watching "DELHI CRIME" it has two seasons one is based on the real incident of 2012 Delhi rap case and it is breathtaking.

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is a fiction story

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a serial killer gang who

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very interesting to watch as it makes us face the reality and

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the incidents that might could happen to us.

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more often. To conclude, as it is full of suspense and thriller people are more likely to watch TV crime dramas.

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their interest level. I

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

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Disruptive school children have negative influence on others. students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view

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You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangement. Write a letter to your business partner. In your letter, ● apologise for the changes ● explain the reason why the changes were needed ● explain the new arrangement

th the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

More and more young people use the Internet to socialize. Why do you think young people prefer this way of socializing? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?