In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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crime stories. I am very much fond of watching non-fiction dramas. Recently I have been watching "DELHI CRIME" it has two seasons one is based on the real incident of 2012 Delhi rap case and it is breathtaking.

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more often. To conclude, as it is full of suspense and thriller people are more likely to watch TV crime dramas.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

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People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe why you are having the party • Give directions on how to get to the venue • Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business, rather that work for an employer. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?