With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Oil

,

gas

and

another

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fuels are very important in our lives. We could not live

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without

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with out

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without

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them decades ago but now these

type

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of fuel can be easily replaced by eco energy

such

solar

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panels and windmills. Now demand

on

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oil

and

gas

is increasing, and people believe that undiscovered places on the earth should be opened, so we can get access to more

resources

. I strongly disagree with

this

view, and I think that people should find another type of fuel that will not harm the environment.

First

and foremost,

such

fuels cause pollution in

environment

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and can be harmful

for

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animals.

Also

burning

oil

and

gas

can lead to

a

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world warming. Today a lot of animals that lived in

past

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few decades now are acknowledged as extinct species. There were plenty of causes but the most famous was pollution of air and nature. Weather now is not as cold as it used to be and it is because of global warming.

This

problem now can convert plenty of residents

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homeless people. Icebergs are melting now, and the level of water in oceans and seas

are

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increasing.

This

can drown some cities.

Moreover

, we have depleted a big amount of natural

resources

such

oil

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and

gas

. Nowadays we can not just open

another areas

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another area

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to access more

resources

, because one day they will be depleted forever. Now we should

to

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find

new

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main source of energy by using solar panels and windmills. To sum up, society should not open undiscovered areas to get access to more

resources

as

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this

can cause pollution.

Also

, the community should find new ways to get energy.