Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays smoking in public

places

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has become a huge concern to the general public. some people say that smoking should be burned in public

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has it

harm

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harms

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the

smoker

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and the people who are nearby.

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strongly agree that it should be restricted in public

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essay will

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discuss

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discuss

the reasons why smoking should be burned in public

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Firstly

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, smoking is hazardous to

human

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body has it causes cardiovascular diseases

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as heart diseases, cancer and stroke. so smoking in public

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does not only affect the

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alone. it

also

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put

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non-

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non-smokers

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smokers

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health in danger

for instance

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in

europe

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Europe

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passive smoking cause 1.2

millions

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premature deaths per

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and these deaths are mostly caused by cancer and respiratory diseases.

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moreover

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it is believed that

by

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introducing smoke -

free

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environment

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and smoke bans in public

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will significantly

reduces

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the exposure of

non

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smoker

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to toxic fume.

On the other hand

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, smoking

cigaratte

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cigarette

cigarettes

in public areas is not good for the

environment

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as it causes environmental pollution by releasing a toxic air

polutant

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pollutant

pollutants

into the atmosphere.

for example

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when

smoker

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throw

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their cigarette butts on the ground. these butts are

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harmful

harmfull

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harmful

to the

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environment

enviroment

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environment

because they take so long to decompose.

therefore

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if

smoking

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the smoking

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ban

is enforce

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in public

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the littering of

of

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these butts will no longer be an issue and the

environment

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will be

cleanier

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cleaner

clearer

for everyone. In conclusion, banning smoking in public areas will be

will be

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effective

to

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the

environment

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and

to

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the

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non-

smoker

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