Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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who should be involved in formulating

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regulations.Few people are of the belief that kids should be responsible to create

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since it applies to them,

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,another group says that only adults should be accountable for it as they are more

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and knowledgeable. If a

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participates in making

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rules

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,

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he/she feels safer rather than feeling threatened.

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will not only bring

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positive reinforcement but

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makes

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responsible and accountable for the regulations they have to abide

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their schools.Take nursery care

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as an example.A majority of early education

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children

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the opportunity to make their own set of

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,thereby,making the

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feel comfortable in the new environment enabling the

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to learn best , as well as develop their skills of co-existing and

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core values

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as following law and order.

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,some

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that a

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is not capable of creating these

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rules

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as the brain of a

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is not fully matured or capable enough to separate the good from the bad and would not have the ability to know what is considered acceptable or unacceptable in a society.Considering In most

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countries,

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regulations are created mostly by adults and it is taught to

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. In conclusion,

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believe that,ultimately,it is the responsibility of both the

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and the adults

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together to create the

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rules

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as it

for

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their harmony and security.