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Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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There has always been a debate
in
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 who should be involved in formulating
school
 regulations.Few people are of the belief that kids should be responsible to create
rules
 since it applies to them,
however
,another group says that only adults should be accountable for it as they are more
matured
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 and knowledgeable. If a
child
 participates in making
school
rules
,
firstly
 he/she feels safer rather than feeling threatened.
This
 will not only bring
a
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positive reinforcement but
also
 makes
children
 responsible and accountable for the regulations they have to abide
in
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by in
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 their schools.Take nursery care
centers
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centres
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 as an example.A majority of early education
centers
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gives
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children
 the opportunity to make their own set of
rules
,thereby,making the
child
 feel comfortable in the new environment enabling the
child
 to learn best , as well as develop their skills of co-existing and
provide
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 core values
such
 as following law and order.
On the other hand
,some
states
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state
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 that a
child
 is not capable of creating these
school
rules
 as the brain of a
child
 is not fully matured or capable enough to separate the good from the bad and would not have the ability to know what is considered acceptable or unacceptable in a society.Considering In most
of
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the
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countries,
school
 regulations are created mostly by adults and it is taught to
children
. In conclusion,
i
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 believe that,ultimately,it is the responsibility of both the
children
 and the adults
coming
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 together to create the
school
rules
 as it
for
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is for
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 their harmony and security.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • responsibility
  • accountability
  • engagement
  • relevant
  • reflective
  • critical thinking
  • decision-making
  • experience
  • long-term implications
  • consistent
  • professionally considered
  • lenient
  • biased
  • discipline
  • order
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