The only way to ensure road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent do you agree?

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stricter punishment or pay fine. I totally agree

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this

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I will show you my opinion

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task. There are some reasons to

agree

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opinion.

Firstly

, most drivers ride cars without any

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. that's why they don'

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don'

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how to drive a

car

correctly.

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they ride a

car

in the around city, there will be some traffic jams exactly and it will create big problems may be

car

accidents. You can see only one reason, drivers hurm significantly for

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.

Secondly

, some

people

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high speed.

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habit for them and other

people

.

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high speed, There will be some problems

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road

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For example

, drivers crash with another

car

or maybe

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accident will be with

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. You can see, There are big problems for

people

or

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is a solution which

give

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more punishments

on

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driving offences to ensure

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safety

. If

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a driver

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driver

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pay

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fine

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several

time

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or take punishments, they might understand their mistakes.

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understand mistakes and want to do

again

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, they can'

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do, because they can'

t

pay

fine

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more times, that's why

that is

good

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a good

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solution to save

road

safety

. In conclusion, I think

this

is

only

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the only

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way to ensure

road

safety

. If government punish like

this

, you can see

significantly

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improve in

road

safety

.