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Throughout the history, people have dream art of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world. How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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Most
people
 comment on what an ideal
society
 looks like.
However
, very few of them actually make efforts to the creation of the perfect culture. According to me, an ideal
society
 should consist of humanity and education as its main pillars. What could
people
 do to obtain these pillars is elaborated
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Firstly
, the most important for the development of a particular community is literacy. Only teaching can help to innovate creative ideas and to introduce new methods in
society
. Many
third world
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 countries are suffering from unemployment and ill-literacy. For promoting schooling, many volunteers should spread awareness in every corner of the country, especially in rural areas. Gender discrimination should be prevented by the public and both males and females must get equal opportunities for studies. Ultimately, well-educated
people
 can automatically stop other cultural evils
such
 as rape, robbery, narcissism, communism et cetera. These all eventually aid in the formation of the perfect
society
. Another crucial factor for any culture is humanity. Generosity is considered the best virtue as it has the capacity to deal with bigger problems in an appropriate manner.
Additionally
, kindness can improve the lives of other minor population in the nation and destroys the barrier between the poor and rich population. Every person needs to do some charitable work according to his capacity.
Furthermore
,
besides
 money,
people
 can give their precious time to the orphanage and the elder houses. On top of these, adopting orphan children is the best way to show humbleness as
this
 act could give them a better life
further
. If every man in
world
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 would start helping others, no one will live with grief and poverty.
This
 jovial and enthusiastic public will
finally
 create an ideal and advanced civilization. To summarize, education and generosity are the best boons to any community.
Hence
,
people
 should work in the direction to achieve these great powers in order to make their country
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heaven on Earth.
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