There have been some problem with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter . Describe the problems . Explain how these problems are affecting the public . Suggest what changes could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the public transportation in our district “Gawler”.
First
problem is that only two Change the article
The first
buses
depart from the station at 7AM which is a peak hour when most employees have to go to their workplaces. In addition
, because of the works
running on the main Fix the agreement mistake
work
road
the Add a comma
,road
buses
have been late during this
week and they have not followed the scheduled program.
Therefore
; most employees could not use
the buses
because they are extremely crowded or they have been forced to wait in the stations for a long time. This
negatively affected all the area residents and they are disappointed by being late in
their work or being forced to Change preposition
for
use
their private cars which is
much more expensive than the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
buses
.
It would be great if more buses
are put in use
in the area and if the buses
are directed to use
another road until the works end so that they can arrive to
the destination stations on time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ola HalabiChange preposition
at
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