There have been some problem with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter . Describe the problems . Explain how these problems are affecting the public . Suggest what changes could be made

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the public transportation in our district “Gawler”.
First
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problem is that only two
buses
depart from the station at 7AM which is a peak hour when most employees have to go to their workplaces.
In addition
, because of the
works
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running on the main
road
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the
buses
have been late during
this
week and they have not followed the scheduled program.
Therefore
; most employees could not
use
the
buses
because they are extremely crowded or they have been forced to wait in the stations for a long time.
This
negatively affected all the area residents and they are disappointed by being late
in
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their work or being forced to
use
their private cars which
is
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are
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much more expensive than the
buses
. It would be great if more
buses
are put in
use
in the area and if the
buses
are directed to
use
another road until the works end so that they can arrive
to
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the destination stations on time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ola Halabi
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