There have been some problem with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter . Describe the problems . Explain how these problems are affecting the public . Suggest what changes could be made

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the public transportation in our district “Gawler”.

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First

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problem is that only two

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depart from the station at 7AM which is a peak hour when most employees have to go to their workplaces.

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, because of the

works

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running on the main

road

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the

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have been late during

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week and they have not followed the scheduled program.

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; most employees could not

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the

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because they are extremely crowded or they have been forced to wait in the stations for a long time.

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negatively affected all the area residents and they are disappointed by being late

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their work or being forced to

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their private cars which

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much more expensive than the

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. It would be great if more

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are put in

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in the area and if the

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are directed to

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another road until the works end so that they can arrive

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the destination stations on time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ola Halabi