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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeather. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #music #cultures #ages #togeather
The given bar graph illustrates the annual average outlay of consumers in America that spent on cellphones, and national and international
fixed-line
services
 from 2001 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the expenditure spent on cell phone
services
 demonstrated an upward trend in the given period, whereas that on national
fixed-line
services
 showed a downward trend. Looking
first
 at the average layout of cell phone
service
 and national
fixed-line
service
, the amount of expenditure stood at around 200 in 2001 and grew to about 750 in 2010, whereas that of national
fixed-line
service
 experienced a decline, falling from about 700 in 2001 to 200 in 2010. Moving onto international fixed line
service
, it remained relatively stable throughout the given period.
Initially
 higher than cell phone
services
, the average cost of international
service
 climbed from around 250 in 2001 to 350 in 2003;
however
, in the following years, the figure experienced a decline, falling to over 300 in 2004 and levelled off at the same number all the way to 2010
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • transcend
  • mutual understanding
  • cultural barriers
  • linguistic barriers
  • cultural exchange
  • traditions
  • instruments
  • rhythms
  • appreciation
  • respect
  • diversity
  • intergenerational bonding
  • age gap
  • popular music trends
  • global events
  • festivals
  • shared experiences
  • sense of community
  • technological advances
  • digital platforms
  • streaming services
  • accessible
  • cross-cultural
  • connections
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