In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, authorities are concerned about investing in transportation. There are many different opinions about
this
situation. Some people
think that it would be better if the authorities spend money on fast trains
, while others like me think that public transport
is more noticeable.
One widely held view is that the fast trains
help passengers access to
other cities without difficulties. These days, they are equipped with cutting-edge facilities, Change preposition
apply
hence
it is convenient and comfortable for people
to enjoy their journey. For example
, most tourists come to China for vacation, they prefer the fast trains
to others because of the reasonable price and satisfying experience on the trains
.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that the demand for public transportations is higher than fast
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for fast
trains
. People
might travel to locations in a day, go from the office to the supermarket, for instance
. Therefore
, public transport
is a good choice for them, which not only saves time but also
saves money. Another benefit of utilising public transport
is the mitigation of pollution issues. The use of existing vehicles would drop significantly if the budget is spent on improving public transportation. Humans could limit car emissions in daily life instead
of being concerned about it.
By the way of conclusion, levelling up public transport
is more practical than constructing new railway lines for fast trains
at present time. Therefore
, the authorities should put it on their list of priorities. Moreover
, the investment cost would be fewer and also
, Correct word choice
and countries
countries
capital is preserved in order to be used better and bring welfare Change noun form
countries'
country's
for
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to
people
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