large companies have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result people graviate towards buying that product

It is true that more and more
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are being launched and having good growth in recent years. Because of that, many people think that these organizations need to supply sports and social facilities for the local residential area they are working
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. In my perspective, I totally agree with
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should provide social appliances for the community is that they are making profits using the local's resources.
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, they need to do something in return. Organizing sports activities, as well as installing applications to enhance the local residents' living quality, could be considered the most effective and realistic action that shows their consideration
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the life of their group.
For example
, raising funds and building playgrounds for children would express an organization's care about the young's both physical and mental health.
In addition
, giving part of a company's income to promote healthy activities and improve current local infrastructures could help build its reputation and make it become more trustworthy.
This
humane behaviour creates an impression in the citizens about a group that has both good financial and social intentions, and
thus
, is worth investigating.
Hence
, the business of that organization would be supported with better conditions from the dwellers and authority. In reality,
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that are frequently mentioned with good vibes are usually those which have proper investment strategies in the local group. In conclusion, it is good for
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to spend on sports and
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their local area. It is not only because of their responsibility of returning to the people that have been supporting them
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but
also
for the sake of their reputation and business in the future.
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