We have a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the convenience of transportation, the population in countries has increased and
also
cultivated diverse cultures from all over the world. There are both positive sides and downsides to
this
issue. In my perspective, advantages outshine disadvantages, and I am going to elaborate on my view in the following paragraph.
First
and foremost, one of the main benefits is that
people
can have more chances to meet friends from different countries and
also
can learn about various cultures.
For example
, I have a friend who came from Korea, and I met her in my workplace. We found that our dietary habits are extremely different,
for instance
, my friend used to eat kimchi as her meal but I can not stand for it.
Secondly
, because of the diversity of the population,
people
from foreign countries open restaurants with their hometown cuisine.
Therefore
, we have more choices of exotic restaurants,
such
as Italian, Korean and Japanese etc.
However
, cultural conflicts may happen in certain places.
For example
, due to the cause of COVID-19 ,some
people
are being racist toward yellow
people
in the US.
As a result
, there are lots of Chinese was been hurt by white or black
people
or even threaten with death. In conclusion,
Although
there are some demerits to
this
issue, I consider it more beneficial to our society of having
people
from different cultures. Because we can meet new friends easier and have more choices for a meal.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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