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People aim to achieve balance between work and other activities of their lives, but few are able to do this. Suggest problems in balancing and some solution for over-coming such problems

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Nowadays , a number of families want to get stability during their profession and other activities,
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them but the issue is that numerous people fell into it so
this
 essay will illustrate problems and solutions for the above statement. The
first
 and foremost reason is that due to the twice jobs , they have no
time
 for their own
life
that is
 the interesting fact ,
For example
 , owing to the financial crisis , people have to do more than one job and if they do not work , it will disturb their family budget.
Moreover
 , during their free
time
 , they spend on devices and most teenagers are involved in it ,
such
 as a survey indicated that the use of technology is increasing rapidly rather than in the past , which could saw that they have
time
 but for the worse activities not for their own
life
.
Furthermore
 , currently , individuals have a busy schedule which is the reason they cannot take out the
time
 for them ,
for instance
 , if they have two options work or
life
 , they would definitely choose the
first
.
On the other hand
 , why do few people achieve it ? , The reason behind it is that they give
first
 priority to their family the fact behind of they knew about the capital is temporary but
that is
 important ,
such
 as in many countries , individuals spend a holiday with their family ,
consequently
 , they live a
life
 without any difficulty and stay happy. In conclusion , everyone should try to do work and maintain the balance between the two things and it will give internal satisfaction and they live without a stressful
life
.
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