You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in reference to address a mistake in you
last
week The Weekend article.
This
magazine publishes
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of the heritage monuments. In the
last
article
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there is
an
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information
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information
about the Art
Museum
which is located in London. The
information
has been printed on the
third
page and mentioned about
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of
this
museum
which is 300 years old whereas the correct age of
this
museum
is 320 years. The Weekend magazine is
the
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one of the most seller magazines and they are many keen readers ready
this
all over the world. Due to
this
reason, I believe that the
information
which you present to the world should be correct and verified with
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sources before publishing. I reckon that
this
incorrect
information
about the
museum
should be corrected as soon as possible to avoid spreading mal
information
further
. I would like you to suggest that you should re-print
this
article in your
next
addition and
also
to
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readers
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attention, the correct
information
should be printed in bold characters so it would be obvious to
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to understand the correction. I would be grateful if you could manage to correct the
information
in your
next
addition. Yours faithfully, Pradip Kumar
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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