You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Madam, I received your letter, and I am delighted to give my unbiased feedback on the cookery

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which I attended two months ago. I would like to tell you about the part I enjoyed the most during the

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the technique of marinating chicken and other meat products. There was much subtle information we were given by the tutor which has been proven significant to cooking delicious food. I have been cooking all daily meals in my house as soon as I completed

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tried some restaurants for a part-time job and they really appreciate my cooking skill, they want to make a contract with me, but I have not thought about it because I am happy to cook for my family. I would like to suggest you introduce new cooking courses from different cuisines

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as Mexican, Chines, Thai, etc. You probably know that these days Chinese foods are very popular amongst many so, I believe that you should involve Chinese cookery class in your upcoming curriculum. I am so glad that you ask for my feedback about the classes. I am so content with the

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. Yours sincerely, Pradip Kumar

pradipk.makwanaMon Aug 29 2022

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