You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Madam, I received your letter, and I am delighted to give my unbiased feedback on the cookery

course

which I attended two months ago. I would like to tell you about the part I enjoyed the most during the

course

the technique of marinating chicken and other meat products. There was much subtle information we were given by the tutor which has been proven significant to cooking delicious food. I have been cooking all daily meals in my house as soon as I completed

this

course

. I

also

tried some restaurants for a part-time job and they really appreciate my cooking skill, they want to make a contract with me, but I have not thought about it because I am happy to cook for my family. I would like to suggest you introduce new cooking courses from different cuisines

such

as Mexican, Chines, Thai, etc. You probably know that these days Chinese foods are very popular amongst many so, I believe that you should involve Chinese cookery class in your upcoming curriculum. I am so glad that you ask for my feedback about the classes. I am so content with the

course

. Yours sincerely, Pradip Kumar

Submitted by pradipk.makwana on Mon Aug 29 2022

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