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Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

#technology #education
Indeed
technology
 has become one of the most important and common things in modern life, especially in
education
 on one hand,there are many advantages regarding
technology
.
firstly
, computers.
students
 can use them to help with their homework,they can
also
 take online courses.and discuss their lessons with teachers.
Education
 can be more interesting and interactive with computers by making games that facilitate learning.Internet is a great
an
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advantage
also
 as it enables
students
 to unlimited sources of information that can be used in learning.schools can
also
 design websites that contain educational books and exams in a more practical way. practising and learning languages can
also
 be easy thanks to modern
technology
 by speaking with foreign people online.
on the other hand
,there are many disadvantages regarding
technology
 in
education
such
 as: the quality of information supplied is difficult to be controlled if it is true or false.it
also
 allows
students
 to take their lesson at home rather than going to school making them less active and a little bit lazy. there are many things that can distract
students
 like ads and games that's why children should always be observed by their parents.
students
 spend
also
 so much time in front of screens making them exposed to a lot of radiation in conclusion,
technology
 is used widely in
education
 nowadays with many positives and negatives.so it should be used in a way that makes benefits maximum.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-learning
  • digital literacy
  • multimedia resources
  • online collaboration
  • virtual classrooms
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • learning management systems
  • adaptive learning
  • screen time
  • tech-savvy
  • cyberbullying
  • digital equity
  • edtech (educational technology)
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