GLOBAL WARMING IS INCREASING DAY BY DAY. WHAT EFFECTS DOES THIS PHENOMENON CAUSES ? WHAT ARE THE SOLUTION

#effects #phenomenon

Unfortunately, global warming has become the most serious issue in the world. Many organizations and governments have sounded alarmed about

this

case. In

this

essay, I will analyse some reasons that led to

this

incident and offer some bits of advice. Definitely, the rapid development of industrialisation and technology exacerbate situations, and over time it is becoming more and more dangerous. Undoubtedly, there are several reasons for our topic, but the two most important reasons are pollution and energy emission.

Furthermore

, the polluted gas exported by manufacturers affects the weather one way or the other.

Moreover

, the contaminated gas

that is

creat by automobiles and vehicles

also

is playing the role in harmful to our atmosphere.

For instance

, many reports said that the proportion of pollution has increased by about seventy per cent in comparison with the

last

year, and our breathing has become more contained by a lot of gases.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

151 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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greenhouse gases
renewable energy
biodiversity
ecosystem
heatwaves
droughts
coastal communities
methane
nitrous oxide
sustainable agriculture
global cooperation
environmental policies
conservation
sustainable living
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GLOBAL WARMING IS INCREASING DAY BY DAY. WHAT EFFECTS DOES THIS PHENOMENON CAUSES ? WHAT ARE THE SOLUTION

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that entering the workplace after school is far more beneficial than studying at university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spend on improving existing public transport.

Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large city. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?