All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often argued that

people

in jail should participate in programs

such

as study and

rehabilitate

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. The following paragraphs will highlight the reason based on my opinion and some relevant examples.

First

of all, many criminals get involved in illegal situations as they did not have an opportunity of studies or work.

Therefore

they start committing

crimes

as it is an easy way to make money.

For example

, in Brazil is not legal to sell drugs,

however

, a lot of

people

become drug sellers as they need to survive, and

this

illegal market returns quick money.

As a result

, they end up in prison, if they spend a long time there without opportunities for work and studies, they would probably start to commit

crimes

again. For that reason,

people

in jail should have access to education.

On the other hand

, others need attention related to their physiologic. They need to re-educate their mind before being put into society again.

For instance

, a man who was sent to prison because killed someone by fighting for what he believed is right, could easily commit the same crime when back to society.

Thus

, rehabilitation is necessary to prevent other

crimes

, with significant benefits not only for the individuals concerned

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but

also

for public safety. To conclude, in my opinion, studies are important to help

people

to get an opportunity for a job and rehabilitation to help them to integrate into society again. These would help prevent other

crimes

again.