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Some say that secondary schools should spend less time on traditional subjects such as history and should spend more time on teaching communication skills and business courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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Some individuals
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 been saying that secondary schools should spend less
time
 on traditional subjects like history and should dedicate more
time
 to teaching
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communication
commmunication
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communication
skills
 and money-related courses. In
this
 essay, I will show that I totally agree with
this
 statement.
To begin
 with,
students
 will catch up with society and learn lots of
skills
. Nowadays,
students
 spend so
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much
muuch
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much
time
 at
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school
schooll
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school
 and if
students
 are taught
skills
 and business, they'll soon develop in an amazing way and catch up with society if they get to approach it in an early way.
Moreover
, if so, the economical state of countries will
devellop
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develop
. Because if each and every
students
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 get educated about socialized
skills
, they'll gain lots of knowledge and grow up to be
a
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successful person, open big businesses and
thus
, the economical state of a country will surely develop. In conclusion, the opinion of junior high schools spend less
time
 on traditional subjects and focus more on
teach
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 communication
skills
 and business courses to
students
 brings lots of
benifits
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benefits
. predictably, in the future, the educational system will make big changes and surely, the economy will change. But no matter what, education is always the best.
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