An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. Why is this so?What solutions can you suggest to deal with this ?
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increase
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increased
rate
of migration of professionals like doctors and teachers from their own undeveloped Use synonyms
country
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countries
well structured
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well-structured
countries
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work
. Use synonyms
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to
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in
solving
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solve
this
issue of concern.
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has
been associated with Change the verb form
have
migration
of white-collar Correct article usage
the migration
workers
from poor Use synonyms
countries
to Use synonyms
affluent
territory.
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the affluent
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, inadequate staffing system Linking Words
of
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for
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the employee
an employee
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employees
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on the other
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countries
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promises
good value for their Correct subject-verb agreement
promise
workers
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also
ensure they Linking Words
work
in a conducive environment which promotes Use synonyms
utilization
of their skills. Add an article
the utilization
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equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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this
developed Correct determiner usage
these
countries
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are
needed tools to make Change the verb form
is
work
easy.
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an
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to
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for
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apply
countries
, the Government could play a major role by providing adequate payments that will motivate these Use synonyms
workers
to stay back. Use synonyms
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non Governmental organizations can Add a comma
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workplaces
work places
with Correct your spelling
workplaces
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equipments
that Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
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makes
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make
work
easy, less harmful and stressful. Use synonyms
This
will in turn stimulate the staff to stay back and continue to Linking Words
work
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also
providing Linking Words
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equipments
can reduce the Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
rate
at which scholars travel to developed Use synonyms
countries
for better education. All Use synonyms
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this
things mentioned above when implemented will drastically reduce the Change the determiner
these
rate
of migration to other Use synonyms
countries
for greener pastures.
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equipments
that will make the working environment conducive will stimulate the Change the wording
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pieces of equipment
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turn
reduce the Add a comma
,turn
rate
at which these professionals relocate to other Use synonyms
countries
.
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also
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increase
their salaries to an acceptable minimum, Correct word choice
and increase
this
will help a great way by reducing the number of Linking Words
workers
that would want to relocate Use synonyms
for
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to
a better and promising
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better and promising countries
a better and promising country
countries
.Use synonyms
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