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It is considered by some that several
source
of bread like doctors and engineers must be Change to a plural noun
sources
need
to provide their service where they had done their study. While there are others Wrong verb form
needed
believe
that it is better to travel abroad. Correct pronoun usage
who believe
Although
I think that it is useful to saying
trained Change the form of the verb
say
country
but I do believe that travelled
Wrong verb form
travelling
into
Change preposition
to
foreign
Add an article
a foreign
country
is beneficial for certain jobs.
First
and foremost, many think it is working in the country
where they skilled
. Add a missing verb
are skilled
This
is one of the excellent way
to demonstrate their responsibilities to the Change to a plural noun
ways
country
because of government provide education ,healthcare,economically support to make them doctor and engineer. Another explanation is that when they have left the country
where they trained, the country
get
damaged economically and socially. Change the verb form
gets
Finally
, when highly
qualified person like doctors and engineers and like them, there are migrateAdd an article
a highly
into
Change preposition
to
different
Add an article
the different
country
it create professionally
problematic situation,Add an article
a professionally
the professionally
for example
, when underdeveloped countries people immigrant
Replace the word
immigrate
into
Change preposition
to
other
Change the wording
another country
other countries
country
it result
in the loss of 10 unskilled jobs, which is a clear drawback for that Change the verb form
results
country
.
On the other hand
, having the opportunity to work other
countries make them more efficient and scholar because of, working with Change preposition
in other
highly
standard people in Replace the word
high
develop
Replace the word
developed
country
which nurchur
their skills and brush up Correct your spelling
nurture
there
working capacity. Correct your spelling
their
Secondly
, by migrating another
leaving place they can able to Change preposition
to another
fulfill
their dream, for Change the spelling
fulfil
instant
, they enableAdd an article
an instant
i
to get standard salary, Change the capitalization
I
lexious
and secured life leaving facilities.
To sum up, despite the different views, Correct your spelling
luxurious
I
can be said that migration is useful for Correct pronoun usage
it
numbers
of professional people like Fix the agreement mistake
number
as
doctors and engineers. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, they ought to be Correct your spelling
independent
independented
to move whenever and where they wish.Correct your spelling
independent
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