Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

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Nowadays, many countries are suffering from
pollution
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the pollution
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of their environment. I believe exploring the main causes of
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issue can assist in finding
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solution to resolve
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issue. Automobile emissions can partly account for
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air pollution, Toxic fumes which are exhausted from different vehicles
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the atmosphere every day, are serious threats to the environment and society. One effective way to remedy
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situation is using more efficient engines and sustainable fuels. Since some cars are old, they are prone to work inefficiently and produce harmful gases
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as carbon monoxide.
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, they should be repaired and improved in order to boost their efficiency.
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, by substituting fossil fuels with sustainable sources of energy, electricity and hydrogen
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instance, the greenhouse
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emissions can be reduced to nearly zero.
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, dumping wastes and littering in rivers and
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countrysides
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country sides
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have several adverse effects on the environment. Since these
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can harm wildlife habitats, governments should raise public awareness about the consequences to encourage people not to drop
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in nature and
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recycle their wastes as it
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possible.
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,
cities
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officials should
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new
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dumping sites in order to prevent leaking
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waste
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nature.
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, lands and rivers can be preserved from
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threats
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the future. In conclusion, since countries have faced
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environmental pollution, governments and people should address
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issue together. I believe maintaining efficient cars, preventing people from littering in nature and finding new safe dumping sites are steps in the right direction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystem
  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • emissions
  • deforestation
  • conservation
  • biodiversity
  • regulatory standards
  • composting
  • urban sprawl
  • green technologies
  • environmental degradation
  • waste management
  • pollutants
  • non-biodegradable
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