In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

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latent needs like saving time to spend with their families.
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testing and evaluating
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driverless
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driverless cars and transportation in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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