Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The zoo is available in every city and most visited place for all age groups. While some
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believe that
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are treated harshly in zoos, other
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including me believe that wild
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can be protected in
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. Few
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accept that zoological gardens are maintained for business purposes and to attract visitors but they lack in providing suitable living conditions, lack of hygiene, improper food etcetera, and are treated cruelly to keep wild
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under zoo-keeper control.
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, a caged and tied tiger was killed and its meat was taken, due to improper security in Nehru Zoological park in 2003, India. In protecting wild nature, safari parks play an important role. Other
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believe that a natural forest kind of environment is provided
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of treating them in cages. I completely believe that proper medication and care are provided if any animal is injured. So wildlife nature preserves play a crucial role in saving
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extinct. In conclusion, zoos are the most popular attraction for a generation of
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. While some individuals think that zoo
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are subjected to harsh treatment, others
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including me think that zoos help safeguard wild creatures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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