government needs to spend more money to encourage the development of artsand sports in schools, rather than to support professional arts and sport events . to what extent you agree or disagree ?

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instead
of spending finances on games and arts at
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should rather utilise it for
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of
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events
held professionally . I partially
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the above statement and would put forward the
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in upcoming paragraphs . on the one hand , if government upgrade the various facilities
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required to organise the games in schools
such
as
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refurbishment
of grounds or providing the pupils with
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faculty ,
then
it will only save its future expenses . To illustrate , by participating in different sports ,students will already imbibe the skills needed in future and
hence
expertise at various games in their formative years only which will eventually save the
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budget to be spent
otherwise
on professional training of players later on .
Moreover
, art competitions like singing and painting are a great means
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upboosting
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the morale and confidence of children
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their young ages and
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them for
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.
Therefore
, it necessitates authorities to employ grants for these
events
in schools as well .
On the other hand
, there are many national and international art concerts organised with
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aid where many professional artists
such
as singers and dancers participate and get an opportunity to showcase their skills . If
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will spend money on
such
events
, it will not only benefit participants but
also
the nation by gaining name and fame all across the globe .
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on
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level with quality performers taking part in them
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a country globally and thereby putting the money to great use . To conclude ,both the approaches have their own pros ,
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it is
likwise
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important to employ money for teaching pupils about arts and sports as it is to spend on
events
held on
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scale .
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