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armers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Agriculture is the backbone to develop the nation economically. Some communities believe that local
farmers
 will get security by implementing some policies related to
taxes
. In
this
 essay, I will give my opinion on
this
 matter and
then
 we will see some relevant examples on
this
 matter.
To begin
 with,
Farmers
 are the
people
, who produce
food
 in every country.
People
 in society can eat healthy
food
, which is produced by local
farmers
.
For example
,
People
 buy
food
items
 from local
farmers
 because they bring the
food
items
 like vegetables, honey, etc to the market freshly. Imported
food
items
 are stored for many days so,
people
 choose some
food
items
 freshly from local
farmers
. Because they produce the
food
 using natural manure in their cultivated fields. On the other side, Some
people
 choose imported
food
items
 to acquire more proteins. But, Community should apply some policies to these imports. These policies are like special
taxes
. By adding some special
taxes
 to the imported
food
 local
farmers
 will get some benefits to sell their local
products
. Most
people
 will choose to buy
products
 which are cheap and have good quality. But during some health issues like protein deficiency, etc
people
 try to buy some imported foods.
For instance
, Noni fruit, which is the most imported
food
 because it deals with the reduction of cancer and improves the immunity power of unhealthy
people
. To sum up, In my view, I agree with the given statement that it is admirable to add some special
taxes
 to the imported
products
this
 is beneficial to local
farmers
 to sell their local
products
.
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