armers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Agriculture is the backbone to develop the nation economically. Some communities believe that local
farmers
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will get security by implementing some policies related to
taxes
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. In
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essay, I will give my opinion on
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matter and
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we will see some relevant examples on
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matter.
To begin
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with,
Farmers
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are the
people
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, who produce
food
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in every country.
People
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in society can eat healthy
food
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, which is produced by local
farmers
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.
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,
People
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buy
food
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items
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from local
farmers
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because they bring the
food
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items
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like vegetables, honey, etc to the market freshly. Imported
food
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items
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are stored for many days so,
people
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choose some
food
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items
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freshly from local
farmers
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. Because they produce the
food
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using natural manure in their cultivated fields. On the other side, Some
people
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choose imported
food
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items
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to acquire more proteins. But, Community should apply some policies to these imports. These policies are like special
taxes
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. By adding some special
taxes
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to the imported
food
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local
farmers
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will get some benefits to sell their local
products
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. Most
people
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will choose to buy
products
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which are cheap and have good quality. But during some health issues like protein deficiency, etc
people
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try to buy some imported foods.
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, Noni fruit, which is the most imported
food
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because it deals with the reduction of cancer and improves the immunity power of unhealthy
people
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. To sum up, In my view, I agree with the given statement that it is admirable to add some special
taxes
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to the imported
products
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this
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is beneficial to local
farmers
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to sell their local
products
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.
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