Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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by some
people
that
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the
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media
have the right to publish details of
people
's private
lives
, while others think it should be controlled. I completely agree with the opinions and in my opinion ,
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media
doesn
'
t
display
care
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that
need
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to
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society's private
lives
and
therefore
,
governments
or
managers
should be controlled for the private
life
of a community .
Firstly
, the
media
experienced
a
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development and it still continues to develop
and
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thus
, the
care
of
media
takes place in our
lives
in an obvious
way
. Many
people
which are famous or ordinary struggle with
media
because ,the
media
generally publishes details of
people
's private
lives
and
also
, it gives lies knows about their
life
for talk among other
people
.
For instance
,
a
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magazine new speaker prepares conversations about somebody and
this
conversation took place with lies
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that
tthat
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that
written
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are written
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. Afterwards , everybody who watched
this
programme or read
this
write learnt lies know or details know about somebody's
life
. Another point to consider is that
governments
should
display
care
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for that
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that
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needs of their community . Because society affects badly due to
media's
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media
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doesn
'
t
display
care
about private
life
.
Therefore
,
governments
or
managers
should set up rules
such
as private
life
doesn
'
t
publish in a
detail
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detailed
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way
.
Thus
, peoples which live trouble
about
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with
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this
problem can rescue thanks to these rules .
For instance
,
governments
can give punish if
media
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the media
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will
publis
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publish
the
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private
prive
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private
life
of
people
in a
detail
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detailed
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way
or they set up seminars
for
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to
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tell problems to
media
managers
or
media
speakers . İn conclusion ,
media
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the media
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doesn
'
t
display
care
which
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needed
needs
need
needd
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needed
and afterwards , many
people
which
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who
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are famous or ordinary live
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in troubles
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troubles
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trouble
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. İn my opinion ,
governments
can execute a few solutions .
Governments
can set up seminars to tell problems to
media
managers
or
media
speakers or they can give punish if the
media
will publish the private
life
of
people
in a detailed
way
and
thus
, every
people
can rescue from these troubles.
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