Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
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is consider
by some Change the verb form
is considered
people
thatCorrect article usage
the
media
have the right to publish details of people
's private lives
, while others think it should be controlled. I completely agree with the opinions and in my opinion ,Correct article usage
the
media
doesn
't
display
care
that Correct article usage
the care
need
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needs
to
society's private Change preposition
for
lives
and therefore
, governments
or managers
should be controlled for the private life
of a community .
Firstly
, the media
experienced a
development and it still continues to develop Remove the article
apply
and
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apply
thus
, the care
of media
takes place in our lives
in an obvious way
. Many people
which are famous or ordinary struggle with media
because ,the media
generally publishes details of people
's private lives
and also
, it gives lies knows about their life
for talk among other people
. For instance
, a
magazine new speaker prepares conversations about somebody and Change preposition
in a
this
conversation took place with lies Correct your spelling
that
tthat
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that
written
. Afterwards , everybody who watched Add a missing verb
are written
this
programme or read this
write learnt lies know or details know about somebody's life
.
Another point to consider is that governments
should display
care
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for that
that
needs of their community . Because society affects badly due to Correct determiner usage
the
media's
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media
doesn
't
display
care
about private life
. Therefore
, governments
or managers
should set up rules such
as private life
doesn
't
publish in a detail
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detailed
way
. Thus
, peoples which live trouble about
Change preposition
with
this
problem can rescue thanks to these rules . For instance
, governments
can give punish if media
will Correct article usage
the media
publis
the Correct your spelling
publish
Correct your spelling
private
prive
Correct your spelling
private
life
of people
in a detail
Change the verb form
detailed
way
or they set up seminars for
tell problems to Change preposition
to
media
managers
or media
speakers .
İn conclusion , media
Correct article usage
the media
doesn
't
display
care
which Correct your spelling
needed
needs
need
needd
and afterwards , many Correct your spelling
needed
people
which
are famous or ordinary live Correct pronoun usage
who
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in troubles
troubles
. İn my opinion , Fix the agreement mistake
trouble
governments
can execute a few solutions . Governments
can set up seminars to tell problems to media
managers
or media
speakers or they can give punish if the media
will publish the private life
of people
in a detailed way
and thus
, every people
can rescue from these troubles.Submitted by atescagdas826 on
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