You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Teacher, I am writing

this

letter with mixed emotions as I cannot continue my current course due to a financial crisis at home despite a full-time job with a minimum wage.

In addition

, I have to look after my family's monthly expenses which are mandatory

such

as skyrocketing rents and inevitable medical bills too.

Last

but not least I even have to pay off my family debts which I did not even think of in my dream. As you know, I did not have any full-time graduate degree from any university and I am very much interested in

this

course, but considering my current situation I decided to attend classes over the weekend only,

Furthermore

, I can extend my class hours during evening time as well as I do not have work during weekoffs. I look forward to seeing your support during the weekend and I am sure that I will get it on a good pace to gain substantial knowledge. I cannot wait to anymore to do my full-time job and attend weekend classes. Best Regards, Lakshmi

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

179 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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